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Outlier of the Week: “Mom why are we poor?” (7.2×)

A 2-slide story carousel by @papanca.io got 8,029 likes and comments, 7.2× the creator’s usual. The numbers, the quoted-question hook and how to reuse it.

This week’s biggest outlier is a story carousel by @papanca.io that got 8,029 likes and comments, 7.2× the creator’s usual. It has just 2 slides, and the first one is a child’s question in quote marks followed by three words: “dad in his 20s”.

It was posted on 30 October (UTC) and sits in the health & fitness niche in our library. The next-highest score among this week’s top outliers was 3.7×.

The numbers

  • Score: 7.2× the creator’s usual.
  • Likes + comments: 8,029.
  • The creator’s usual: about 1,115 likes and comments (8,029 ÷ 7.2).
  • Slides: 2.
  • Format and niche: story, health & fitness.

The score is what matters: on this creator’s own account, the post did more than seven times what a typical carousel gets. If the score is new to you, here is how an outlier is worked out.

What does the first slide say?

“mom why are we poor?” dad in his 20s — @papanca.io, 7.2×

No promise, no tip, no “here’s how”. A child asks a blunt question, and the label “dad in his 20s” tells you whose story this is and when it takes place. The reader swipes to see the other half.

In our 10 hook patterns, it sits closest to the comeback: quoting something someone says to make a tiny story in one slide. It is a variation. A comeback usually answers the quote on the same slide; this one names the person and leaves the answer for slide two.

We can’t see inside anyone’s audience, so this is a reading of the evidence, not a certainty. Most of the structure points the wrong way.

The slide count is in the weakest band. In our sample of 14,317 scored carousels, those with 2–3 slides reached 2× their creator’s usual 17.9% of the time, the lowest of any slide band, against 23.9% overall and 27.9% for 11–15 slides. At 2 slides, this post is far shorter than the median health & fitness outlier in the library (7 slides) and the median story outlier (9).

The format and niche are below average. Story carousels reached 2× 22.7% of the time. Health & fitness carousels reached it 21.7% of the time, the third-lowest rate of our 17 niches, after lifestyle & travel (17.0%) and fashion & beauty (18.3%).

The hook has the features that do best. Among 9,471 transcribed first slides, hooks of 6–10 words reached 2× 26.0% of the time, the highest of any length band. This one is nine words. It also contains a number (“20s”): first slides with a number reached 2× 25.5% of the time, against 22.2% without one. It is written in normal case, which did slightly better than mostly capitals (23.4% against 23.0%).

The question is inside the quote. First slides phrased as questions reached 2× only 20.0% of the time, against 23.6% for statements. Here the question belongs to a character, and the slide as a whole reads as the opening of a scene, not a question aimed at the reader.

Put together, the length, format and niche all sit below average, while the hook sits in the strongest bands. That leaves the first slide and the idea behind it as the most likely explanation.

One caveat applies to all of these figures: they are base rates across a mix of creators we track, and a correlation is not a cause. Short carousels reach 2× less often on average; that doesn’t mean a 2-slide post can’t be the top outlier of the week.

How to use it in your own niche

You don’t need the same subject to borrow this structure. You need a question that hurts a little and a person who has to answer it. Here is how to remix it, following the same process as Artem’s remix case study.

  1. Write down a blunt question someone in your niche hears. From a client, a child or a friend. Put it in quote marks, in their words, in normal case.
  2. Add a short label instead of an answer. Name who is being asked and when, in three or four words. Keep the whole first slide under ten words, and let it set up a scene rather than explain it.
  3. Use the next slide to land the contrast. This post needed only one more slide. Say what changed, or what the person did next, and stop.

Keep the structure and replace everything else: your question, your words, your visuals. Don’t reuse the creator’s slides or wording.

For more carousels built on a single scene, browse story carousel examples.

More outliers from the last 30 days

  1. First slide of a carousel by @espressocooly: f*ck AI we made this with our own hands274× usual

    f*ck AI we made this with our own hands

    @espressocooly · 17.8K likes + comments · 6 slides

  2. First slide of a carousel by @beautyinc: BEAUTYINC WWD EXCLUSIVE 'Love Island USA' Star Jana Craig Launches New Lash Line147× usual

    BEAUTYINC WWD EXCLUSIVE 'Love Island USA' Star Jana Craig Launches New Lash Line

    @beautyinc · 69.9K likes + comments · 4 slides

  3. First slide of a carousel by @endlesstools: Full Angle Control106× usual

    Full Angle Control

    @endlesstools · 42.1K likes + comments · 9 slides

  4. First slide of a carousel by @reynardlowell: The beautiful of a house FULL OF BOOKS71× usual

    The beautiful of a house FULL OF BOOKS

    @reynardlowell · 14K likes + comments · 12 slides

  5. First slide of a carousel by @wethinkdeeply: A FRIEND OF MINE WORKS AT A FUNERAL HOME. HE TOLD ME THAT ALMOST EVERY DAY, HE HEARS A EULOCY HE IS SURE WAS WRITTEN BY AI.58× usual

    A FRIEND OF MINE WORKS AT A FUNERAL HOME. HE TOLD ME THAT ALMOST EVERY DAY, HE HEARS A EULOCY HE IS SURE WAS WRITTEN BY AI.

    @wethinkdeeply · 321.6K likes + comments · 7 slides

  6. First slide of a carousel by @olli.rasmussen: Netflix: $20 Claude: $2045× usual

    Netflix: $20 Claude: $20

    @olli.rasmussen · 8K likes + comments · 9 slides

Frequently asked questions

A 2-slide story carousel by @papanca.io, posted on 30 October, which got 8,029 likes and comments. That is 7.2× the creator’s usual of about 1,115, the highest score among this week’s top outliers in our library.

It can, though it is less common. In our sample of 14,317 scored carousels, those with 2–3 slides reached 2× their creator’s usual 17.9% of the time, the lowest of any slide band. This week’s top outlier has 2 slides, so treat the average as a pattern, not a rule.

Do question hooks work on Instagram carousels?

On average they do a little worse. First slides phrased as questions reached 2× their creator’s usual 20.0% of the time in our data, against 23.6% for statements. This week’s outlier puts the question in a character’s mouth, which makes it read as a scene rather than a question to the reader.

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About the author. Artem Novitckii is the founder of Top Carousels, a library of Instagram carousels scored against their creator’s usual engagement. He posts carousels about AI tools at @artem.novitckii.

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